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White baiting with dad

Editor Logan jones Creator Logan jones Characters Dad Mom and mack jock Chapter 1 One week before whitebait season

 It was one day before whitebait season and I like white baiting. So I told dad can we go whitebaiting in whitebait season Dad said “ok mack”. YAY!!! I screamed and jumped up and down 5 times before I collapsed to the ground with excitement. YAHOO!!! I yelled Mum shouted!!! Be quiet. Days went by in till whitebait season that night i could not sleep for about 2 or 3 hours but eventually I dozed off. In the morning me and dad had pancakes YUMMY!!! The maple and golden syrup was dripping down the sides of my pancakes. “DAD!!!! WAKE UP AND GET THE GEAR READY” I yell hoping not to wake up mum. Dad said “ok i will get the big net and scupper Net”. “Dad thinks that the big net is high tech so i have to set up the big net.” “ok let's go” Dad said “ok i am ready to go” i said. When me and dad arrived we set up ready for whitebaiting “can you grab the poles” said dad “ok” i said so i went to the back of the truck and grabbed the poles. Suddenly i heard a KABOOM i stop in fright then i heard a rumble rumble then i realized what was happening it was a huge earthquake!!! “AHHHH” i SCREAMED dad yelled “ARE YOU OK MACK YES I yelled back” finally the earthquake is finished” i started to walk back. “Dad is it time to start” i said “yes” dad said “put the big net please” said dad “ok” i said once again i will get the scoop and start i said “ok” said dad so i go get the scoop and go find a spot then as i put it in i find school with probably had 1583 in it and i got 369 of them about 5 mins later and dad got 57 then about 1hour i got 96 and dad got after 10mins 108 then 1hour still did not catch any thing dad said 10 more mins i said ok then i nearly fell into the river dad then said time up i yelled NO!!! Dad said yes then i got at the last second a hole pack of white bait dad was shocked i had 3949 whitebait. Packing up and home Pull the net up Mack dad said ok i said so pull it up and put it in the van dad said hopp in Mack and i said into what the van dad said ok off we go when we got home mum said did you get any whitebait i said yes enough for whitebait fritters for tea then i said is jock back from his friends yes he is upstairs in his room ok JOCK!!! mum yelled YES!!! He replied COME DOWN YOUR BROTHER IS BACK!!! OK!! Jock said hi did you catch enough for fritters yes i said YAY!! He yelled time to start making the fritters ok. Fritters i will make them you can put it in the oven ok TEA TIME DAD YELLED yum jock said we had a fun time i said.

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