Writing Reflection

I am in Rubic 3 Trying to get to Rubic 4 i am working on stongVerbs

This is an example of a strong verb: Once me and Mitchell (Brother) went and got the eggs from the chickens next second Mia comes bolting down to us and chased the chickens.

My pitch

      What is my idea: To help kids that want to play sport but can’t afford gear for sports like rugby soccer and basketball. And fundrise and collect boots, shin guards, mouthguards,equipment

What will i learn and make: i will make kids that want to play sports but they can’t afford sports gear etc.

Why do i want to learn and make this: i want to help kids that like sports but won’t  be able to play and make them happy.

How will i learn and make this: i will find a company that helps kids and contact them to see if they can help.

What will success look like to me: success will look like helping kids and putting a smile on their face.