Getting Better At Writing

This is my writing. The writing that is on the bottom is the old writing that I did at the beginning of the year. I had trouble reading it because it didn't make any sense. The writing that is on the top is my new writing. Mrs O read it out and I wrote it again on a white board. Now I can understand what I wrote. I have learnt how to write lots of new words so my writing makes sense. I feel very proud of how much I have learned.